Technical Writing in Action

by Scott Wilson on January 7, 2017

I was at a party recently and was asked what I do for a living. “I’m a technical writer,” I replied. “I wrote the instruction book you didn’t read when you bought that tech product you don’t use anymore.”

Awkward silence; one woman starting backing away from me.

But one of the strengths of a technical writer, I’ve heard, is perseverance, so I soldiered on.

“For example,” I said to the people still within earshot, “how would you describe this? Try to be pithy but accurate.” I wondered for a second if I should define “pithy” for them.

I didn’t. Instead, I performed a maneuver I had seen in a movie when I was much younger.

“Um, take a giant step to the left”? one person ventured. “Doesn’t quite get the springiness of it,” someone else said. “How about, jump to the left?”

My group was now actually increasing in size and interest, something my previous explanations of technical writing had thoroughly failed to accomplish. Probably the gymnastics aspect, I thought.

“Try to bring some warmth to it,” was my reply, “as if you were talking to a friend.”

“I’ve got it,” said the person who’d mentioned the giant step, “it’s just a jump to the left.”

“Good,” I said, “now step two.” And I did another maneuver.

“That’s easy, step to the right.”

“Can we tie it in with the first step?” I asked.

“OK, how about, and then a step to the right?”

“Perfect,” I replied. “So how about this?” And I performed two actions simultaneously. “Just be short and direct.”

“Alright, put your hands on your hips.. ” and she trailed off.

“Bend your knees?” someone else ventured, clearly new to the group.

“No, that’s a workout move,” was the response. “ How about, bring your knees in tight.”

“Very good,” I said, “but now things get harder. What about this?” And I did the final maneuver of the dance I’d learned from a movie at chaotic midnight showings, never realizing it was my start in technical writing.

Furrowed brows all around. Clearly, I’d gone beyond their developing technical writing skills.

And then an older woman walked up; apparently she’d been watching from across the room.

“My goodness,” she said, “that pelvic thrust is driving me insane.”

And finally someone got it. “So let me get this straight,” he said, “you teach people to dance the Time Warp from the Rocky Horror Picture Show?”

“So it seems.”


It’s just a jump to the left.

And then a step to the right.

Put your hands on your hips.

And bring your knees in tight.

But it’s the pelvic thrust.

That really drives you insane.

Let’s do the Time Warp again.

Words and music (I know you’re singing it to yourself!) by Richard O’Brien.


Part Two: The Talk

I don’t know if you’ve heard of it before, but there’s an organization called Write the Docs that calls itself a “series of conferences and local meetups focused on all things related to software documentation.”

You could be forgiven for not knowing about Write the Docs because, they don’t currently have a Los Angeles area meetup (that I could find), and they are focused on software documentation.

Now you’ve heard of them. More information is available at, stunningly,

Anyway, they had a meetup in San Francisco in November 2016 where Andrew Etter, author of Modern Technical Writing, was the speaker.

Here are some of my takeaways from his talk:

  • He didn’t just restate what’s already in the book. I had read the book, so this was a pleasant surprise.
  • He is a low-key, engaging speaker. Again, a pleasant surprise. Not all good technical writers are also good speakers.
  • His new content was good. He spoke about the process of creating an ebook, he provided some additional content related to the recent developments in technical writing, he spoke of his experiences as a technical writer and tech writing manager, and he provided his take on what is the “differentiated value add” of a technical writer. If you don’t know what that phrase means, as I didn’t, he explains it.

My advice: Find the video online (here’s the link: and watch it, especially if you read the book and liked it. You’ll learn more about the author, about creating ebooks, and about his thinking of what’s important in technical writing.

For another take on the same talk, visit

Part One is an overview of the book Modern Technical Writing, authored by Andrew Etter.

Part Three covers my thoughts on both the author’s take on some of the technical writing best practices and on some of the recent developments in software technical writing that he mentions.


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